During my peer writing I was very surprised with the quality and overall organization of the piece. The quotes were well embedded into the paper and clearly analyzed and supported. They all flowed well and connected back to the main thesis. There were however some changes I would make to the writing. Certain phrases and ideas, while the general concepts were there, were sometimes confusing and could have been reworded and organized in a different way to make sense to the reader. General spelling and grammar, while not necessarily the main focus of the peer review, was very good with hardly any mistakes. One suggestion I would give though would be to just be more clear with some transitions to give a real understanding of the main idea for the paragraph.