I chose to read the chapter “You Mean I Can Say it That Way?” because I my essay I got comments on and felt like rereading my essay it was very confusing at times. I knew what I wanted to say but looking back at it the paper did not accurately represent what was going through my head. I was caught up in making my paper sound overly professional that it lost meaning and context. In the chapter I read it talked about how to correctly put your thoughts down in styles that were organized in an accurate logical sense. I was able to understand how to blend my own sentences with a professional style without the usual confusion the arises in most of my essays. I believe this is one of the worst aspects of my writing and through reading this chapter and applying those skills I have increased my writing ability greatly.