My third and final essay best exemplifies my ability to cite sources using the MLA guidelines as well as making local revisions to address typical errors. A normality for most of essays, as well as my writing in general, run-on sentences. I would extend sentences to include way more information than needed in a singular idea. This came to my attention through both comments from peer review and an in class video projected during the beginning of one of our classes. One thing I took from this was that two strong sentences can add to an idea much better than one long drawn out sentences. Another main instance that demonstrated my ability to cite sources using MLA guidelines was my in text citations which included the correct structure and my work cited which for this specific essay I did not have any problems with. For this essay as well with the inclusion of media images from external websites I made sure to follow the correct MLA structuring for example for my image of WR AJ Green Length/Extension provided by Bleacher Report. Overall this last essay very clearly demonstrates my progress with using the MLA guidelines as well as making local revisions to address typical errors.
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